My first big fat progressive house anthem!!?

[patient 267]

Bumpin this thread for some feedback!

[oakich]

just keep up the good work, i can see that you have talent, just keep on
producing, develop the skill, download tutorials, remake tracks and you'll
get there all the best!

[ian3dge]

id call this electro, certainly doesnt fall under my definition of progressive - its far to harsh sounding....

but as an electro track its pretty decent, the vocals are a bit loud in the mix. your drop after the vocals is very very good though, have to say. one thing i dont like is how it goes straight into another breakdown after that, that would irritate me on the dancefloor.

keep producing bro - you have a good ear. and dont fall into the trap i did of starting loads of tracks and not finishing them!

[TheDJCollision]

Wow, great track! I love the synths!

[patient 267]

SO I took the time to Re-do this properly and I am starting to be really happy with the result! Fixed the song structure, Redid almost everything except the vocal part and the dropping parts.

So take a listen, and tell me what you think, any crit is really really appriciated.

[patient 267]

i want to edit my first post and put the new version in there instead but where is the edit button??!?? cant find no edit button?!? ican has edit button?